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Show that you are an expert | All the information can be found on our website. | Based on your description, I would recommend our standard account to start with. |
Be helpful | “No reply” | I apologize but I am currently engaged with another client. But my colleague will help you/ I can call you back in 30 mins. |
Do not use jargons | Addressing a non-IT audience:
The page looks weird, as CSS is hosted on netDNA servers. We should add the file to our root folder. | We are experiencing technical issues with our servers. I will replace the code manually to resolve the issue. |
Use clear and direct correspondence | Thank you for taking time to share your experience from the onset of intending to try trading FOREX til deciding to trade with Admiral Markets. | Thank you for sharing your thoughts on Forex. I am happy to answer your questions. |
Avoid gambling references | Forex is just like poker, except that everyone has an equal hand. | Knowing when to buy or sell currency involves knowledge and understanding of the market. |
Empower and encourage | Forex is too complicated and risky. | With the right training and tools, Forex can be profitable and rewarding. |
Promote MTrading in a positive light | MTrading is a Forex provider. | MTrading has a key presence in the Asia Pacific Rim and the Emerging Markets of Africa and South America. |
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Be specific | The page is all wrong! | The image used on the page is wrong. It’s not appropriate for use on this country’s website. |
Do not use jargons | Addressing a non-IT audience:
The page looks weird, as CSS is hosted on netDNA servers. We should add the file to our root folder. | We are experiencing technical issues with our servers. I will replace the code manually to resolve the issue. |
Use facts to support claims | Our sales have increased. | Our net deposits have increased by 25.8% over the last 3 months compared with the same period last year. |
Share information and ideas | If I tell you my strategy, then I’ll have to come up with a new one. | Here’s a great article I found. I’ll post it on Wiki so that everyone can learn from it. |
Be positive | Sales are down and we’re losing people. What’s the point? | We have an excellent team supporting our product and service offerings. We can do this! |
Be polite and respectful | It doesn’t take a rocket scientist to see it’s not that complicated! | Can you clarify why the system cannot support the changes I requested? |
Be open and show genuine interest | Sorry, what did you say you did over the weekend again? | Glad to know you had a good weekend. It was great beach weather wasn’t it? |
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